Tuesday, April 14, 2015

Indiegogo: A Hero's Birth

It begins!
 I've cleared everything else off my plate. A Wizard's Gambit is launched, Demon Invasion is off for editing, I beta read a novella, and proof read a novel.

Time to roll up my sleeves and dive into writing the final installment in the Empire's Foundation trilogy, A Hero's Birth.

I'm over half way through writing the first draft, so I've fired up a one-month Indiegogo campaign to raise money for editing and cover art. Bare bones, I need $1000 to pay for the developmental editing. I raised that much with my previous Indiegogo campaign, so I hope I can do it again for the final book!

But wait, that's not all!
I do have a stretch goal of an additional $800 to pay for the cover art. For every $100 over $1000 that I raise, I will be bringing out bonus character cards that I'll include for everyone who orders a physical perk. I got Harvey to do up a card in advance so backers know what to expect.

When 750 years old you reach, look as good you will not, hmm?
Should I somehow raise more than $1800, there will be an additional character card added for every $100. I've got a huge list of characters I'd like to see brought to life, so I'm not even sure what the upper limit would be for fundraising before I ran out of characters to draw.

"But why would you need more than $1800 you greedy pig!?"

Well, this time around there are a lot of physical perks, and those are going to eat up some (most) of the donations. I'm setting the price for each item at Item Cost + Estimated Shipping + $5 donation. So say everyone orders mugs at $35 each. If 52 people get mugs, making the donation $1820, I've only actually raised $260. Now, I get bulk order discounts, so the cost of the mugs go down as more people order them, from $14/mug to $10.50 for an order of 50 mugs, so that donation level would be higher, but it still won't be the full amount.

I want one of these mugs!
Honestly, I anticipate the digital books to be the most popular, and those have no shipping cost. It's more of a pre-order for the final book, and 100% of those donations go to me (minus fees paid to Indiegogo).

Yes, I will cheer if I hit $1000, or $1800. No doubt about it. Those donation levels will go a long way to helping me publish the book. I'm anticipating having to cover some of the costs myself. But this campaign will allow me to defray some of the costs, and give people a chance to pre-order, or even get some pretty great looking stuff!

However you want to help out, whether it's donating directly, or sharing news of my fundraiser, I appreciate it! 

Saturday, April 11, 2015

The Truth about More Books

I've learned firsthand a truth that I've heard from others...

More books is better.

Sales for A Noble's Quest weren't bad. I mean, not bad for a first-time author who had no networking at all with readers or authors. There was an absolutely massive learning curve.

But then there was a lot of support for my Indiegogo for A Wizard's Gambit, which blew me away. I raised over $1000 of my $2000 goal, and chipped in the rest myself to get the book done.

Now that the second book is out (you can find it on Amazon and Smashwords), I've experienced a resurgence of interest in A Noble's Quest, and both books are generating sales.

And you know why?

Because you guys are awesome, that's why. Sure, I wrote the books, but as book #1 proved, writing a book does not guarantee you readers. But I've had such a great response to my writing from you that other people are taking note and seeing what the fuss is about.

So that brings me back to the truth. When you have more books out there, people are more likely to find out about them. They see a book they like, and bounce to other books. With a small fan base (that thought blows my mind) of readers who are eager to read book 2, and a stellar review for the book from an advanced reader, I feel like I'm starting to generate some momentum.

It's early days still, in terms of being an author. I hold no delusions that I'll break even any time soon. If I ever break even, that'll be a bonus. I'm writing for you (and for me - I like telling stories!). One reader at a time. That slow, organic growth is the way I've always seen it happening for me. Make you all happy, and maybe you'll spread the word. Draw you all in, and maybe you'll love these characters and stories as much as I do.

I can't say it enough. Every +1, like, favourite, share, retweet, and comment is exhilarating. You guys are awesome!

Thank you. A million times over, thank you.

Friday, April 3, 2015


So tomorrow A Wizard's Gambit comes out on Amazon and Smashwords! I'm pretty excited about that. The sales numbers don't register until the books go out, I guess. I know of one pre-order for sure, and I'm wondering if anyone else will.

Honestly, with all the copies I gave out to Indiegogo supporters, editors, and beta readers, there aren't a whole lot of other people to pre-order! I know there are more people waiting for the paperback, too, so I'm hoping the author proof looks good and I can get that set up soon.

With all that in mind, I'm going in with realistic, low expectations. A Noble's Quest was not a runaway success, and this one won't be either. I learned a long time ago that most authors don't get famous overnight, and what helps is building up a collection.

So now I have a collection of two novels, a collection of short stories, and a standalone short story in Theme-thology: New Myths. Not bad for just before my 36th birthday! It blows my mind that I'll have an entire trilogy out well before I'm 40... maybe even the first book of my second series (we'll see how things progress).

And I'm working on my next novella, Demon Invasion. It's almost done. I've just finished a final proof-read with the new knowledge I've gained through the course of editing A Wizard's Gambit to make my aunt's life a little easier.

Saturday, March 28, 2015

Pre-order A Wizard's Gambit now!

Official release: April 5th!
I've finished my final reading of A Wizard's Gambit!

+Harvey Bunda was under the weather last weekend, so he'll be getting the paper back cover to me soon. I went through +Andy Goldman's notes and e-books are out to Indiegogo supporters.

Thanks for your patience, especially to my Indiegogo supporters. I know I thought the book was going to be out in 2013/2014, but that was before I realized how much editing work was required. Now that I know the difference between developmental and line editing, I can better plan for future releases.

With the book out, I'll be re-reading my novella Demon Invasion and sending it out for line editing. Then it's back to work on writing the final book in the Empire's Foundation trilogy, A Hero's Birth. This week I finished an in-depth outline for the book, so that should help speed up the writing process. At first I though I would follow the antagonist all the way through the book, but it's going to bloat the story too much. I'll follow him at key points, but I'm going to have another character describe interactions with the antagonist while the protagonists were busy elsewhere. In this way I can give the information, and let the reader wonder what he's up to.

While I'm writing A Hero's Birth, I'll also be starting up my final Indiegogo campaign, where I'll be posting one ad per day over a 30 day time period. The idea is that they will be unique and interesting, so as not to irritate people. I hate annoying ads that say no more than "Buy my book!" So I want to keep it fresh, both for myself and for anyone who is (un)lucky enough to see every single ad. 

If you'd like to pre-order your copy of A Wizard's Gambit, you can find it here at Amazon and Smashwords! I'm so grateful for all the shares across Google+ and Facebook with news of the book's impending release. You guys are awesome. :)

I always have trouble classifying my writing, but I think +R.J. Blain did it nicely in her post:

Saturday, March 21, 2015

Ryan's 8 "Rules" of Writing

Reading through A Wizard's Gambit for the ... I don't know how many times I've read it. But anyway, on this final proof-reading pass, I've picked up some spots that needed to be cleaned up. Bits of words I forgot to delete through the editing process, or entire sentences that didn't seem to fit as well as I'd like anymore. Even that promotional video I just linked isn't entirely up-to-date anymore. I had my aunt go through the lines back when we were putting the video together, separate from the rest of the story. But things change through the course of reading/editing. My favourite mistake I've caught so far is this one:

If there's one lesson I've learned over the course of bringing out two books, it's that you shouldn't rush.

I learned that the hard way with A Noble's Quest. I got it professionally edited, then published it.

But back then I didn't have all the writing contacts I do now, or the knowledge I've gained over time. I still don't know everything (far from it!), but going too fast because you're eager to get a book out won't help you.

I hate lists that authors give with advice. Everyone has their own way of doing things, and different things work for different people.

  • Drink coffee. 
  • Drink alcohol. 
  • Write in the morning. 
  • Write at night. 
  • Have a quiet space. 
  • Work in a coffee shop. 
  • Write every day. 
  • Write when you're inspired.
  • Write a blog. 
  • Start with fan fiction.

All that stuff is personal preference, not rules, even if the writer's a jerk about it and tries to shove the belief down your throat. Sure, that's what worked for them, but you are not them. There are probably as many different ways of writing as there are writers.

That said, there are common undercurrents running through a lot of the advice, and through my own experience (take that with a grain of salt) I've narrowed them down to these...

They work for me!

1) Put out the best work you can.

That might sound silly. Of course we want to put our best foot forward, but it's central to pretty much every point I'm going to make.

2) Don't edit your own work.

You know what you meant to write. When you're reading your own writing, you will probably be blind to a lot of errors - my common problems are: repetitive wording, and using too many words when fewer are more effective. I miss that stuff every time. That's why it's vital to have an editor or two.

I know some people with high levels of language education think they don't need editors. They might be right. But for the rest of us, editors are your friends. I've read too many indie books that didn't see an editor - actually, I haven't read them. I start, then stop after a chapter or two. Do you really want your potential readers tossing your book and never looking at anything you write ever again?

3) Don't send a line editor your first draft.

Your first draft should be treated like garbage, not worth the pixels it was constructed with. I'm serious. Go through it at least three times yourself until you can't find anything wrong with it. Then send it to beta readers to see if it makes sense. Sending a bad story with plot holes out to an editor for sentence structure and grammar checking isn't going to make your story good.

4) Don't have "yes men" for beta readers.

If you give it to your spouse, sibling, parent, aunt, etc with the hopes that they will tell you it's a marvelous work with no errors whatsoever, just don't. Find the most brutally honest people you know - maybe other writers - and get them to shred it. Now, if someone from that list doesn't have a problem being honest with you and saying your writing needs work in various spots through the book, that's fine.

Personally, I send my book to my dad because he's read so many fantasy/sci-fi books I can't begin to count them, and he's very honest in his feedback. But would I send my book to my mom for beta reading? Bless her, I love her to bits, but she doesn't have a mean bone in her body and hearing the book is great on my first try isn't going to help me put out my best work. She can enjoy the final product.

5) Don't take it personally.

Odds are, you haven't created a masterpiece. Even after going through it yourself, and having beta readers critique it, it needs work. But at this point, you won't be wasting your money going for editing... unless you go into it thinking you're God's gift to writing.

Fighting with your editor is not going to make working with them easier. You may have creative differences, but that's the point - you're hiring the editor to tighten up your story. If you don't want feedback, don't write. Authors need to have a thick skin, because your writing won't be for everyone, and you will get bad reviews/ratings. If you can't even handle constructive criticism from someone who you've paid to give it to you, you're in the wrong business.

I've been told that I'm great to collaborate with from all three editors I've worked with. Why? Because I listen. I don't have a big head about my writing, and I try to find ways to incorporate changes that make sense. I'm not saying be a door mat and let your editor walk all over your story. There will be certain things you want to keep, and that's fine.

But I'd say I keep about 90% of the changes my line editors make. Sometimes a word is suggested in place of 5 or 6 words, but that word is so archaic that I don't want it because I'm hoping to get younger readers. In A Noble's Quest, I used the word crepuscular because I loved it. But a beta reader came back to me and said, "WTF? This doesn't fit with the feel of the rest of the book." So I tossed it. It's a beautiful word, but if readers don't know it, it's best not to use it. Now, if you're writing highbrow pieces, you might want to challenge your readers and make them look up words. That's not my aim, though.

Developmental might be a bit lower... 70%? But even when we're tossing ideas around and working out the kinks to make the flow better, I'm appreciative of all ideas put forward. Just some things don't work with my vision.

In the end, it's your book, and your call, but at least be nice about it.

6) There are different kinds of editors.

I was unaware of this until my second book.  

  • Developmental editors will look at the elements of your story: flow, progression, character growth, and red flags. By red flags, I mean something that you wrote that's flat out wrong. They might offer suggestions for areas that need strengthening, or tell you that something you've done simply doesn't work.  
  • Line editors are probably the sort of editor you first think about. They check your spelling, grammar, sentence structure, etc. 
  • I have never used a copy editor, but if you're in journalism you probably use them to make sure you're not going to wind up in court for what you've written. Not so relevant for fantasy writers.

I can't recommend developmental and line editors highly enough.

7) Slow down.

Publishing a book is exciting. But don't pull the trigger on publishing your book until you've double checked it, even after you think you're done with it. Get someone else to proofread it, too!

Granted, there's only so much checking you can do, but by re-reading your book after editing, you might catch a few things you changed during edits that don't read properly. Maybe you have a new double negative because you forgot to delete a word when you implemented the changes, and it would totally throw off the meaning you were going for. Maybe a word slipped past you, your beta readers, and your editors - we're all human. You won't come out with a perfect manuscript, but a thorough reading will help clean it up.

8) It takes time.

All of these steps are important for building trust with your readers. If you can bring out a book with a solid story that reads well, people will come back to you. You're not going to reach any level of fame overnight with one book, but you're building your writing career one novel at a time. 

From what I've read, an author doesn't gain a following until they have 4-6 books out. That's right. That book you just slaved away on probably isn't going to be a one-hit wonder that catapults you into the limelight. You probably won't even make your money back on your investment if you stop there. It's akin to a scam at the start, where you do all the work and get no reward and someone says, "But wait! Write another one, and things will get better!" You do that, see a minor uptick, still don't break even, and that same person says, "Well, really, what did you expect with only two? Do it again!" And so if you're really committed, you keep publishing until you've got enough books out there for people to take notice. Readers want to see what you're made of, so trust is key to keep people coming back for more.

Best of luck in your writing endeavours! And if you want to argue any of these points, please do so. I'm always up for a writing chat/debate.

Saturday, March 14, 2015

Final editing pass complete

I've handed off my copy of A Wizard's Gambit to +Andy Goldman for a final proof-read. I'm going to be spending time formatting, and re-reading the book.

From the initial formatting I've done, it should be about 405 pages in paper back. I've tightened up the line spacing to condense it (fewer pages to print = lower cost for everyone).
Now I need to finalize the blurb for the back of the book, and get the full cover done. I took a crack at the blurb the other night, and this is what I have so far:

Thomas, Sarentha, and Eliza will learn that peace never lasts. After fighting for their freedom, wicked forces beyond the Tamorran Empire's borders rise against them. Tamor's king falters when threats of genocide and an undead plague arise. The would-be heroes must fill new roles of responsibility and power to hold Tamor together.

When more menaces emerge, each darker than the last, their adventure spans the entire continent. Thomas, Sarentha, and Eliza must make difficult choices and face their darkest fears to uncover their lost history by reviving long-dead wizards. Only by illuminating the past will they be able to step into the future.

One misstep could lead to their undoing.

It's tricky balancing "something for those who have already read the first book" and "don't put in spoilers for new readers." I'll roll it around for a bit before sending it out to be put on the back cover of the paper back book.

It's almost ready!

In the meantime, here's some art created by the amazingly talented +Harvey Bunda.
Ramar Wettias, top human wizard.

When the Indiegogo campaign starts up, these are the sorts of character portrait cards that will be up for grabs if I make my goal and start getting into "stretch goal" territory. The pictures will be printed with the art on the front, a short write-up on the back, and shipped to anyone (including International backers) who requested a physical perk.

I'd really like the full set. I'm counting on you guys! 

Also, I received my first cheque from a book store this week, which was very exciting! It's fun to think that people walked into the shop, looked at my book, and thought, "This sounds good enough to pay money for without knowing the author personally!"

I hope I never lose that feeling.

Wednesday, March 11, 2015

Screwin' with #PitMad

What is #PitMad? It's this Twitter thing where upcoming authors try to snag an agent/publisher by posting a message about their book.

I posted this:

Now, I'm not actually looking for a traditional publisher. Far from it. I love being an indie author. Sure, my book sales might have only broken triple digits, I don't have a huge online presence or following, but like Yoda says, "Control! Control! You must have control!"

I like being in charge. I write/edit at my own pace (which is insanely frantic right now, btw - editing of A Wizard's Gambit is almost done). I have total control over what my covers look like. I can set my own strategies going forward. 85-90% of my sales don't go to middle-men.

So why take part in #PitMad? I heard some other authors saying it's a great way to grow your follower numbers on Twitter (not that I use it much - I don't think my life is interesting enough to tweet everything about it to entertain others). Also, I have a macabre hope that I'll get a bite, and get to tell an agent I'm not interested in their work.

Indie author forever!